WeIrDRoB's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[madness drunken]

sick but.....

that was good better then most of the half assed madness (wannabe) tributes there were some obvious problems like for ....

1. the gunz are half or double the size there supposed to be there huge .... make the gunz look more real, i mean they had great detail but compared to the characters they were too big,

2. work on your backgrounds and the detail of the backgrounds they were very plain looking...,

3. speed your frame rate up to like 22-26 fps that should do good for a action video like this.....,

4.get some more sounds for the guns and the background actions and definitely some music to pump up the video.....

take more time with your videos.... its something you need to learn to make a good flash video that will make the viewers on NG happy with your video although now i think theres more idiots on here that have no clue of what there even talking about then anything... but good luck on future projects... you got potential, keep up the good work and i'll be looking out for more stuff from you in the future.... peace xWRx

[Unfortunate Edd 3]

better

this was better then the first one i watched i don't know if it was 1 or 2 i watched first, it made me chuckle a bit.... theres still things you need to work on when edd was walking it wasn't that natural looking it was off key each time the body swayed back and forth to make it look like hes actually walking ....alil less jumpy on the left to right use your onion skin tool for things like that it helps a whole lot with animations....try to make them a bit longer and you'll get a better score on these .... you have the potential like i said.... keep up the good work and take more time in to your videos they look and come out better when you do, it takes most average to well rounded animators more then a couple weeks depending on the project there working on..... good luck on future projects i'll keep an eye out for you videos

[SuperXero Battle Royale 1]

good sprite video but...

i liked the concept and all the voice acting was not to shabby ... there was a good story line that was catching my attention but not enough action pump up the fights a bit more i know your using sprites and that your a bit limited on what you can do try to add some more efx's to make the video more flashy its a good movie over all and a good idea but it still needs some work .... plan out your video a bit more and this will look and be a awesome sprite flash good luck on future projects.

BlazingGamer responds:

Thanks, I'll try harder next time.

[Unfortunate Edd 2]

need a lot of work

the character needs some worj like arms legs hands such as those, work on it please ... need a background, speed up the frame rate, make it longer this was too short to even to be considered a short film a short is like 1 minute or soo if not a bit longer .... the art work was not bad... the blood was good i always like blood... try to add more then just one thing happening to this guy, he fires a gun and a car crashes barley blows up then he dies not too interesting.... work on your videos more before you submit them i can tell you have the potential not the patience... and i'm surprised this wasn't blammed yet ..... good luck on future projects and take your time NG isn't going anywhere....peace

[Madness Incendation]

not to shabby guys

this is probable one of the best madness tributes i've seen so far but its not the best ether some of the clips were laggie but good none the less .... keep up the good work ....

[GhostFight-BOS-Part1]

show me !!!

TEACH ME HOW YOU DID THAT !!!!! this was a excelent movie i want to know how you did all of the efxs and such they were amazing

[Sprite Fight!]

this was...... ummm really bad.....

this wasn't a very good submission to tell you the truth you could of done better given what i saw .... i can tell you have more talent then this.... heres some advice and take it.... speed up the frame rate to around 22 to 26 fps it will give your animation a smoother look and not such a laggie look to it, try to add a story line and a good plot for the characters to be fighting about, though there was a small amout of humor to this save that for a parody, work on your backgrounds some more, add some blurs or glow efx to your efx's it will make them stand out better, mostly if its just a straight fight animation make it like triple the length of this and add a lot of violence, and blood.... take your time with animating it will come out better...... good luck on future projects......

zck2020 responds:

Thanks for the advice. This is my first animation using sprites. I made this as sort of a test animation; to see what would happen if I tried doing something like this. Though I will keep in mind what you have written next time I attempt something like this.

[Psychopath Simulation]

errr... umm... needs work

ok first off your buttons through out the video for the choices of yes or no, the no didn't work witch was stupid to even have in there if they didn't work.... i liked some of the ideas you had in there tho super jesus .... that was one messed up eyeball but other then that if your going to make a flash video like this with pointless death at least try to make it a tad bit more interesting maybe like a main character..... and yo drop the swastika that was WWII hitler is dead...... deal with it and get some more originality ......you got a 1 for my vote to let you know......

[Spares]

great flash

that was excellent enough said and oh yeah i found the character that looks like waldo

[One Man Stick Army]

well

i would have to say that your animation was smooth with all the characters ..... there was some serious problems with this, though it was good, great idea. it needs a story line or at least some main dude he has to fight, need to work on the enemy's a bit more like there was a thousand of them and not alot of them moved ....sound was there but it didn't match up too well.... also the whole zoom in and shaking thing needs to be toned down a bit, but don't get me wrong there was alot of good things in this your efx's were great some need a bit of work but good none the less...take your time with your next video keep up the good work