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[Stickmen fight]

welll......... face it....

ok first off ever thing he has said (the guy bellow me Zedd56) is very right on ever thing i will break it down a bit more ... speed up the frame rate your fps... obviously you can do this cuz you not on 12 fps ... i would say in between 22- and 24...

if not higher you just have to make the movements a bit closer, use the onion skin it is very helpful i never know about it untill i hit it, its on your time line use that its such a help for newer animators but really the main thing you pretty much took an idea that someone had already come up with and compared to this, this sir is crap.

come up with a main character, story line,blah blah blah... another tip for you think of physics and physical movements.

you have the art work skill to make a nice video if you take time with it...
g\l on future projects.... xWRx

zer0hawk9339 responds:

actually i've done this in 18 fps and ofcourse I know about onion skin and atc.Ofcourse you can't do anything without it so thanks about hte coment :)

[Generic Madness Movie]

Ummm WTF ... yeah

that was not Generic that was point less and stupid .......... HAHAHAHAHA but made me laugh .... it was alright it made me giggle .... but try harder next time ..... AND FUCK CHUCK NORRIS god damn flaming fairy texas ranger queen behind that round house kick fallows a a rainbow of fruity faggish color HAHAHA.... peace
G-L on future projects

Figikii responds:

Thats why I had him shot.

[CS.SiFvsSa2C#2]

nice .....

the video was awesome great concept of CS... i liked the design or the characters and the names of the characters....this was well put together nice amount of time for the video to play through showing that the game can take some time with good players .... although alot of the scenes could of used some work and your character animations too.... but nothing that you can't work on. next time you make one of these add more detail to your efx's alot of them were great... but some need a lil bit of work ..... with the characters i liked the fact that you constantly showed the names of that individual at all time or when the scene changed ..... great work i look forward to seeing more of your work in the future

9/10 and got my 5'r
-xWRx peace......

Mejson responds:

Thank you for honesty opinion :)

[Half - Life Madness style]

good work could be better IF...

take your time make it longer more violence and not as random ...... excellent use of madness sprites slow down your motions per frame and try to work with a higher frame rate trust me on this it will make the motions more clearer and smother also speeding it up make good for action vidz your doing far better then most ppl on this site (for your first time) if you need any pointers i could give you them all ya have to do is ask PM me or Instant message me on my aim name .... i'm not one of these noobish animators or ppl who just write shit ass reviews for no reason they all act like this is myspace ...... FAGS!!!

ghostflames responds:

ummm well thnx, i gotta say although u gave me a 7 this was the kind of review i wanted, detailed and helpfull, thnx i am looking forward to working with you if u want ?

[SuperXero Battle Royale 1]

good sprite video but...

i liked the concept and all the voice acting was not to shabby ... there was a good story line that was catching my attention but not enough action pump up the fights a bit more i know your using sprites and that your a bit limited on what you can do try to add some more efx's to make the video more flashy its a good movie over all and a good idea but it still needs some work .... plan out your video a bit more and this will look and be a awesome sprite flash good luck on future projects.

BlazingGamer responds:

Thanks, I'll try harder next time.

[Sprite Fight!]

this was...... ummm really bad.....

this wasn't a very good submission to tell you the truth you could of done better given what i saw .... i can tell you have more talent then this.... heres some advice and take it.... speed up the frame rate to around 22 to 26 fps it will give your animation a smoother look and not such a laggie look to it, try to add a story line and a good plot for the characters to be fighting about, though there was a small amout of humor to this save that for a parody, work on your backgrounds some more, add some blurs or glow efx to your efx's it will make them stand out better, mostly if its just a straight fight animation make it like triple the length of this and add a lot of violence, and blood.... take your time with animating it will come out better...... good luck on future projects......

zck2020 responds:

Thanks for the advice. This is my first animation using sprites. I made this as sort of a test animation; to see what would happen if I tried doing something like this. Though I will keep in mind what you have written next time I attempt something like this.

[LSCCE]

SICK!!!!

ok ok ok that was great, awsome EFX's and blood, i liked how you mixed different styles of combat in your film, there was only one problem the stick characters were a bit sloppy looking but as you art work looks you can easily fix that. good luck on future projects

Ace0fredspades responds:

oh, okay...

[orange vs gray stickfight]

AWSOME!!!

great stick flick, understanding it was just a short it would have been a great if you did add some more to it. here's a tip as well increase the frame rate a tad bit more and your 3-d views will blend in a bit more i noticed that when the gray stick smashed the orange stick with the water tower part, but all in all a good flash short.
keep up the good work

loginatu2 responds:

thanks ^^!

[Sleepless Nights]

good good

LAY OFF THE DRUGGS!!! nahh then that would be the right thing to do but anyway good work on this very experimental video there were some flaws to it but i'm not gonna nit pick as it is a exprimental video good luck on future projects you got my 5r and 10's cuz i liked it

notorious responds:

awexome dude you're the first one to review 10 thanks for the good review!

[Skater6 JM freestyle]

i hate youu...........

right now i hate you with a passion but with the ut most respect i've been working on my own stick flash and this is good and creative the chractes aren't all that smooth but it works good for this style of animation ...... once agin i hate you lol ... btw where did you get the sounds i need some like that hit me up on AIM

MarcyVF responds:

I got the sounds frm tony hawk pro skater4