you got my 5 r, i liked the d&d skit and the mix up with the random pokemon intrusion..... keep up the good work....
great peice of work.....
I've seen better....in terms of clay mation, your good don't get me wrong..... length of the videos cost you much points, if your gonna post a video make it a bit longer(at most like a good 2mins+) keep your frame rate up cuz it was good and at its smoothest for your style of animation, there were still some gaps that i had seen in some of the transitions( like ball to humanoid form) add at least 2 to 3 frames more of the mold into it (if you get that).... there's no point to the video..... add a couple different color character/ models to it and you might have something but I'm really a flash only animator.... maybe somewhat of a story.... or complete abstract form you spent that much time just coming up with an idea which is much tooooo short.... take your time and have fun with it don't take rush and fallow through with the completion... you can do it, i know a good animator when i see the work..... peace xWRx.............. P.S. drunk as hell.... ha ha ha ha
ok...... this.... is.... crap.... I can obviously tell your new to flash, what you need to do is plan out what you want to make and not make something that would take you 3 hours to do, a good animation takes at least several months to make... start with the many of tutorials here on NG..... (www.newgrounds.com/collection/flasht utorials) i hate having to blam a submission from a new artist/animator, but sadly its the only way we learn LOL, you've gotta lot of learning and work a head of you... good luck on your future videos.
take your time
great efx's thats about it make a movie and maybe give you a vote i won't give it anything cuz it seems like something you just wanted to show off
welll......... face it....
ok first off ever thing he has said (the guy bellow me Zedd56) is very right on ever thing i will break it down a bit more ... speed up the frame rate your fps... obviously you can do this cuz you not on 12 fps ... i would say in between 22- and 24...
if not higher you just have to make the movements a bit closer, use the onion skin it is very helpful i never know about it untill i hit it, its on your time line use that its such a help for newer animators but really the main thing you pretty much took an idea that someone had already come up with and compared to this, this sir is crap.
come up with a main character, story line,blah blah blah... another tip for you think of physics and physical movements.
you have the art work skill to make a nice video if you take time with it...
g\l on future projects.... xWRx
actually i've done this in 18 fps and ofcourse I know about onion skin and atc.Ofcourse you can't do anything without it so thanks about hte coment :)
Ummm WTF ... yeah
that was not Generic that was point less and stupid .......... HAHAHAHAHA but made me laugh .... it was alright it made me giggle .... but try harder next time ..... AND FUCK CHUCK NORRIS god damn flaming fairy texas ranger queen behind that round house kick fallows a a rainbow of fruity faggish color HAHAHA.... peace
G-L on future projects
Thats why I had him shot.
nice video BUT!!!!!!! just to let you know to be correct It is yes infact that weirdo Jimmy Urine from MSI.... But the bands name is The left rights- Its jimmy urine and the drummer locked in a room with a synth... and a guitar A lot of drugs lol....
awesome video ..... i love the 8 bit style mixed with the anima artwork, you should do like a couple of the songs from the left right CD theres a bunch of F'ed-up songs on that, Can't wait to see more from you good luck in the future
the video was awesome great concept of CS... i liked the design or the characters and the names of the characters....this was well put together nice amount of time for the video to play through showing that the game can take some time with good players .... although alot of the scenes could of used some work and your character animations too.... but nothing that you can't work on. next time you make one of these add more detail to your efx's alot of them were great... but some need a lil bit of work ..... with the characters i liked the fact that you constantly showed the names of that individual at all time or when the scene changed ..... great work i look forward to seeing more of your work in the future
9/10 and got my 5'r
Thank you for honesty opinion :)
good work could be better IF...
take your time make it longer more violence and not as random ...... excellent use of madness sprites slow down your motions per frame and try to work with a higher frame rate trust me on this it will make the motions more clearer and smother also speeding it up make good for action vidz your doing far better then most ppl on this site (for your first time) if you need any pointers i could give you them all ya have to do is ask PM me or Instant message me on my aim name .... i'm not one of these noobish animators or ppl who just write shit ass reviews for no reason they all act like this is myspace ...... FAGS!!!
ummm well thnx, i gotta say although u gave me a 7 this was the kind of review i wanted, detailed and helpfull, thnx i am looking forward to working with you if u want ?
SOOOOOOOOOO WHAT.... that was excellent.... hey guys just cuz you have to goto school doesn't mean that you can't work on a project together its just gonna take more time to finish it, trust me i did animations ever day after school and even in school (that where i learned flash) none the less great flash keep up the good work
9\10 cuz it was short but it rocked and you got my 5r
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